Sunday, November 27, 2011

playing with words

Perplexed pre-schoolers wail piteously
a paucity of playground posts peep from the putrid waters
parents pray the council will not prevaricate any longer
"put the playground on higher ground!"
Persistent precipitation portrays the wisdom of parents.

Pugnacious rocks pummelled the previously pretty plain
uprooted plants, eroded placid platypus haunts.
Pummeling precipitation eroded the once playful riverbed

POW

Playground now in the past
more like a pool.

6 comments:

Pearson Report said...

Fantastic play with "p" words - really well done!

Jenny

PEARSON REPORT

Manzanita said...

Aaww, Poor platypus and kidlets. Are you getting ready for the A-Z...Love
Manzanita@Wannabuyaduck

Hilary Melton-Butcher said...

Playful wave to you ..
Putrid waters no posts
shall peer out, to appeal
to petrified pugnacious
readers who will plod
painfully to Poland.

Great thought Sue - cheers Hilary

sue said...

Jenny, thanks - it was fun!

Manzanita - I had a rush of blood to my head when I revisited some of April's posts - I couldn't resist the temptation to play with words again!

Hilary - !! hehehe, thanks :)

Liza said...

Wow! Creative and fun!

Arlee Bird said...

Now my tongue's twisted.


Lee
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